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Check my Japanese sentences ?

1) ie ni doko kimasu ka ?
what time will you be home ?

2) kono hoteru wa takaku miemasu
this hotel looks expensive or this hotel looks tall

3) yoku ryouri dekimasu ka ?
can you cook good ?

4) bangohan wa nanji desu ka ?
what time is dinner ?

5) hon o yonde wa kyoumi desu ka ?
is reading books an intrest of yours ?
(something along those lines, does this sound okay ?
or how about

5.5) yonde ga suki desu ka ?
do you like reading ?

6) suki na nihongo no rajio o kikimasu
i like listening to japanese readio

7) futari no otouto imasu. hitori wa sansai, hitori wa juusansai desu.
i have two (younger) brothers, one is three, the other is 13
(im really not sure how to say this one, help ?)

8) ichijikan aruite imashita
i walked for an hour

9) watashi to tomodachi wa eiga o mitai desu
me and my friend want to watch a movie

10) senshuu, kirei na hana imashita
last week i had a pretty flower

11) watashi no tomodachi wa akai shatsu o kimasu
my friend is wearing a red shirt

12) kyou wa, ichiban suki na sensei wa gakkou imasen deshita
today my favorite teacher wasn't at school

i've been practicing making sentences and sometimes i have friends make up sentences for me to try to translate, let me know whats right and what corrections i need ! :D

hi i'm japanese
1. ie ni nanji ni tsukimasu ka?

2. kono hotel wa syukuhakudai ga takasou desu (looks expensive)
kono hotel wa totemo takai hotel ni miemasu (looks tall)

3. anata wa ryouri ga zyouzu desuka?

4. gangohan wa nanji ni narimasuka?

5. dokusho ga suki desuka?

6. watashi ha nihon no rajio wo kikunoga sukidesu

7. watashi wa hutari otouto ga imasu. hitori wa sansai, mouhitori wa juusansai desu.

8. you can say "ichijikan aruite imashita" if you're saying that "I was walking for an hour" but if you want to say "I walked for an hour", it's gonna be "ichijikan arukimashita"

9. put "watachino" in front of tomodachi then it's perfect:-)

10. sensyuu watashi wa kirei na hana wo motteimashita

11. "watashi no tomodachi wa akai shatsu o kimasu" is more like "my friend will wear a red shirt" so it's grammatically correct but if you want to say "my friend is wearing a red shirt" you have to say "watashi no tomodati wa akai shatsu wo kiteimasu"

12. watashi no ichiban suki na sensei wa kyou gakkou ni imasen deshita.

hope my answers can help you=)

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Number 8 should be just Ichiji