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Check my Japanese sentences ?

1) ie ni doko kimasu ka ?
what time will you be home ?

2) kono hoteru wa takaku miemasu
this hotel looks expensive or this hotel looks tall

3) yoku ryouri dekimasu ka ?
can you cook good ?

4) bangohan wa nanji desu ka ?
what time is dinner ?

5) hon o yonde wa kyoumi desu ka ?
is reading books an intrest of yours ?
(something along those lines, does this sound okay ?
or how about

5.5) yonde ga suki desu ka ?
do you like reading ?

6) suki na nihongo no rajio o kikimasu
i like listening to japanese readio

7) futari no otouto imasu. hitori wa sansai, hitori wa juusansai desu.
i have two (younger) brothers, one is three, the other is 13
(im really not sure how to say this one, help ?)

8) ichijikan aruite imashita
i walked for an hour

9) watashi to tomodachi wa eiga o mitai desu
me and my friend want to watch a movie

10) senshuu, kirei na hana imashita
last week i had a pretty flower

11) watashi no tomodachi wa akai shatsu o kimasu
my friend is wearing a red shirt

12) kyou wa, ichiban suki na sensei wa gakkou imasen deshita
today my favorite teacher wasn't at school

i've been practicing making sentences and sometimes i have friends make up sentences for me to try to translate, let me know whats right and what corrections i need ! :D

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