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I write poetry and i don't know if it's good enough to put in a writeing compatition so i need help deiciding?

heres a couple 0.0 tell me if i should or not and if i should please give me a website were i can submite them
Blood Rushes:
Blood rushes
feelings hurt
people screaming
people crying in agony
wishing they could save their life
the life of the one they loved
the one that thought no one loved them
the parents wanting to hug their child
not able to see them again
the one with their life ahead of them
the one that died of hate
the one trying to make others life’s better
trying to end others suffering
but only causing more
the one that is hurt
how do you save a life?

easeing pain:

I’m standing
staring at the knife in my hand
I told myself I would go through with it
am I ready to leave the world just yet
yes I am
I have disappointed my parents
let my sisters down
hurt my friends
hurt my loved ones
I deserve to go
to leave this world
to ease them all pain
I slowly start to cut into my hand
I let the blood flow down
then I quickly slit my throat
blood rushes so fast so quickly

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